Saturday, February 28, 2009

First love

first love,
like its outline,
was Full of question mark,
unpredictable and most of all,
it is Hurt.

if your lover fall in love,
with u also,
it is the most wanderful thing,
to occur in our live.

on other side of view,
if u appeal to your lover,
there are two posibility one`s,
will get,
either one`s lover accept or not.

if your lover accept,
i congratulate u,
u fine your mr/miss right.

if your lover Reaject u,
don`t sad,
we still have one`s who love us,
which is`GOD'


writen by jen.

to whom who read this poem,
please give me your comment,
thank`s for your comment,
i will apperciate it,
THANK YOU VERRY MUCH.

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  2. wow~
    so meaning-ful
    especially for christian
    i think...
    try to put more affection in it
    and try to understand deeply in LOVE
    u can write the better poem than this
    anywhere
    kambateh~
    i'll always support u
    ^^

    ~`yvonne`~

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